高考英语满分作文:Green Action in Our Class

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高考英语满分作文:Green Action in Our Class

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【试题回放】情景作文

假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华,为响应绿化祖国的号召,你班四月十二日去郊区植树,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,介绍植树活动的全过程,给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。

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提示词:郊区suburbs

April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.

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本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文,与环保结合,立意较好。文章思路清晰,要点连贯,在语言的表达上选词新颖,同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。

英语专四作文满分范文:学生评价老师

专四题目:学生评价老师

Many students are required to evaluate their teachers but some teachers complain that these evaluations are unfair and can in some cases lead to the dismissal of a teacher. In your opinion, is the students' evaluation of their teacher a worthwhile exercise?

专四范文:

Difficulties with Students' Evaluation of Their Teacher

The students' evaluation of their teacher can be a very subjective proposition because it depends a lot on how the evaluation is made and how it is subsequently used. I believe most teachers would like to know how effective their teaching really is and how it benefits their students.

A difficulty with students' evaluation of their teacher is finding the right formulae to achieve an honest, constructive and independent response. The size and makeup of the class can be a reason for this difficulty. The larger the class the more likely will be the range of ability in the students. That fact Limits the interaction between the teacher and individual students and automatically influences how students will perceive the effectiveness of their teacher. Smaller classes are much less likely to have a great range of ability in the students and their evaluation of their teacher will tend to be more consistent. A crucial aspects with students' evaluation is how it is used. If it is a formal part of the school's program it needs to be used constructively in liaison with the teachers for the benefit of both teachers and students.

For students' evaluations to be worthwhile they need to be independent and honest. Negative comments from students, delivered with sincerity, can be very valuable in helping teachers change their teaching methods and making them more effective. Biased evaluations can lead to misinterpretation and less productive outcome. (237 words)

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evaluation process depends on the methods used and how the evaluation is applied.

评价过程取决于使用的评价方法以及评价是如何进行的。

dealing with opinions,it is usually very difficult to be entirely objective,

我们表达观点的时候,很难做到完全客观。

hers can be more effective with genuine feedback from their students.

老师从学生那里得到真实的反馈时,他们会更有效率。

s size has a significant impact on students’ perceptions of their teacher.

班级大小对学生对老师的看法有重要的影响。

some ways,negative feedback is more valuable to a teacher than positive comments.

在某种程度上,负面的反馈比正面的评价对老师更有价值。